Post by RaspberryJelly on Mar 18, 2005 13:06:47 GMT -5
A country lane,
How inhumane.
An endless cry,
Yet no reply.
A hospital bed,
Hanging on by a thread.
Deprived another day,
Life taken straight away.
A total mess,
Of what I possess.
A life long endeavour,
A memory forever.
A reason to forgive?
It was his life to live!
Can't understand why,
My last goodbye.
A life thrown away,
When will they pay?
A loss of faith.
His last breath,
Death.
Ok so, i'm not too good at poems (self evident) but like the one above is about something specific (i know its not exactly indirect, its pretty obvious) but the events of the poem kinda triggered off problems within myself...its about my friend whom was knock down and killed (3 years ago) by a drunk driver. the driver left him at the side of the road to fucking die. Not only this i had to watch my friend die three days later in hospital. no one should ever EVER have to go thought that, so the poem is very important to me. it reminds me of i guess how lucky i actually am and of how crule and thoughtless some people actually are. So yeah, there you go...
x
How inhumane.
An endless cry,
Yet no reply.
A hospital bed,
Hanging on by a thread.
Deprived another day,
Life taken straight away.
A total mess,
Of what I possess.
A life long endeavour,
A memory forever.
A reason to forgive?
It was his life to live!
Can't understand why,
My last goodbye.
A life thrown away,
When will they pay?
A loss of faith.
His last breath,
Death.
Ok so, i'm not too good at poems (self evident) but like the one above is about something specific (i know its not exactly indirect, its pretty obvious) but the events of the poem kinda triggered off problems within myself...its about my friend whom was knock down and killed (3 years ago) by a drunk driver. the driver left him at the side of the road to fucking die. Not only this i had to watch my friend die three days later in hospital. no one should ever EVER have to go thought that, so the poem is very important to me. it reminds me of i guess how lucky i actually am and of how crule and thoughtless some people actually are. So yeah, there you go...
x
